Okay, here's a terrible and short intro I wrote to a pilot episode for a live action Ghosbusters series. The premise is, the Ghostbusters open up a branch in Los Angeles, and the series centers around that branch, with a new cast of characters, and a few old tricks and new tech, I hope to finish this by Halloween. Let me know what you all honestly think.





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(Screen fades in to RAY STANTZ standing against a filing cabinet, flipping through it. After a moment, he pulls out four papers, checking through to make sure they are the correct ones.)

RAY STANTZ
A-ha. Here they are. Let's just get these signed and distributed and you fellas'll be official.

(He moves to a desk with a placard for his name on it, Raymond Stantz, Ph.D. Behind him are various tools and artifacts that hint at his occupation. Seen sitting across from him is a currently obscured person, only able to see the beige jumpsuit he is wearing. This man is DANIEL WEINBERG, Ph. D.)

DANIEL WEINBERG
Thank you Dr. Stantz. I'm sorry you have to drive all the way to L.A.

RAY STANTZ
Don't sweat it, kid. It'll give me some extra time to theorize on a new protonic disintegration defense system for the firehouse.

(RAY signs the papers as he says this, and stands. He begins to move towards the door and DANIEL goes with him. They reach the door and DANIEL goes to open it, with RAY stopping him.)

RAY STANTZ
And kid?
(DANIEL's face can now be seen, and he is talking to RAY, both visible. He nods in acknowledgement.)
You and the rest of your team will do great. Just remember your training and always be creative.

(DANIEL smiles and nods. They exit the door and walk side by side, blocking view of it.)

DANIEL WEINBERG
Dr. Stantz, I was wondering when we'll receive our patches?

RAY STANTZ
Right now, kid.

(They continue as the view stays fixed, and when they are off screen, the door can be seen, now closed, with a large Ghostbusters logo on the front of it. Zoom on logo, keep logo, fade rest to black. Cue title sequence.)